Feck ye snakes!!

I found this quite funny not OMG I'm falling off my chair funny but I laughed inside my head :)
and seriously those who don't get the st paddy reference shouldn't be celebrating paddys day anyway! your opinions are null and void :P

Sssmazin'

AWESOME!!!

Love the art style and the story is great too, it just has the right amount of funny.
Does he really need training? He left that bell ringer pretty messed up!

Difficulty scales harshly

Way too hard!
It looks fun to begin with and is a nice concept but the difficulty scales to harshly.
After about level 10 you are spending half your time beating up Doug while barely making a profit. To Improve I would make Doug a bit more of a pussy and get kicked out more easily and increase the cash rewards, or lower the cost of the first few ranks of rewards.

on the plus side It is very pretty and polished looks wise.

could be better

It's mostly quite good just a few things are a bit weird looking, The girl on the lefts boot is just bizzare like she has some crazy club foot specially made shoe, and the girl on the right's head just seems a bit small for the rest of her body.

Still keep at it, practice makes perfect and all that jazz!